My brother might have to go to war because of the draft that Bush said he wouldn't put out but most likely will. We are over there dying for no reason. Just getting picked off. It has to be the biggest mistake ever.
-Conner

An interesting poem. It's always an eye-opener when someone states their opinion that is so far from your own.. but nevertheless, this was a well structured poem and written very well.

Take care and keep writing!

~Grace

HELL YEAH! NICE POEM GIRL!!!! exactly how I feel. beautifully written.

Ok. So Bad.

i loved your poem. you are so right. i hate him for so many reasons especially for starting this fight. there is no reason to be out on their land but i guess its all bushes fault and those who voted again. my boyfriend left june 21 to iraq i havent heard from him since he left. keep up the good work. ypur poem was really good check mine out and let me knoe wat you think