Comments : Last Breathe

  • 20 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    PAH! Bad?! Nothing near! Thsi was amazingly written! I absolutly loved it...so deep and emotional....brilliant m'love...I'm glad this won't be your last..I truly enjoy your writings...xxxx
    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 20 years ago

    by NoPatience

    omg! that was amazing. i love how much emotion you put into your writting great job 5/5

  • 20 years ago

    by LoSt

    was definitely not bad was amazing.... just like the rest of urs ..... great poem

  • 20 years ago

    by ~Tamara~

    This peom was very good... sorry if it is like that for you.... it is for me...all the stuff i right about has something to do with me... you shoul come a read it... but i liked it alot! i gave it a 5

  • 20 years ago

    by Chloe

    :'(
    I don't want to say I'm sorry, because I know it won't help you. After all, it is just a word being abused too often. But what I can say is that it breaks my heart to see you so unhappy, and I truly wish there was something I could do. I just wish I could say something that would make it all go away; but I can't. Even though I really don't know you, it hurts me to hear that you're going through all of this...

  • 20 years ago

    by i love you

    this poem is awesome...its not bad....ur poems are VERY GOOD! keep writing:D <3ayna<3

  • 20 years ago

    by Jessy

    THIS POEM IS NOT BAD! it is really good realy sad but good you are good at writeing but they are always ssad but i like them because i can relate to themn keep writing:)