Her Note

by Erin   Nov 4, 2004


This poor girl, she had no one,
She had given up, she thought this must be done,
She grabbed the paper, a pencil and wrote a note,
Crying as she did, this is what she wrote:

I'm gone, there's nothing you can do about it,
I hope no one misses me, I won't miss getting hit,
I just couldn't go on, I just wasn't strong enough,
I never was bright, or even that tough...

I always hoped it would get better, but it never did,
I wasn't allowed to be happy, fate forbid,
There was no room for me, I was stuck in the middle,
To me, life was hell.

I hope you live life, longer and happier,
I hope you have nothing to worry about, nothing to fear,
I just wasn't that lucky, fate wasn't my friend,
This is why, my horrible life had to end...

No one suspected, that this young girl was sad,
They thought her life was good, never bad,
Now she's gone, and it makes their heart ache,
They realized that ignoring her, had been their biggest mistake.

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  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I love this one. I'm really amazed by your skill of writing!!! 5/5 Definitely!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by mimzy

    This almost made me cry.. great work

  • 19 years ago

    by Queen Marlene

    OMC.............................erin this is so sad.. :*(... omc.... keep it up honeii... love you.. 5/5

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