Unspoken Confession

by Allen   Nov 4, 2004


This may sound stupidly silly
But… I was really missing you
Two weeks without your smile
My world was bitter blue

But today I heard your voice
It was ever so sweet
Despair’s burden was lifted
That moment, my heart felt complete

You have no idea what you meant to me
It’s always you that I longed to see
Whenever you’re near my heart would wish
Wish you would set it free

I… I care so much about you, I really do
Even though I act like I have no clue
I guess I was shy and was trying to hide
Hide my feelings, care… and love for you.

I would be so excited for even one date
That’s if you would give me a chance
A chance for me to be your man
A chance to start our own romance

*This poem was done without too much attention... they are merely the things I wished to say... they've been occupying my mind, had to get them out in someway...*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mia

    This gets its way into my heart. It seems so... natural (can't find a better word)
    I get the feeling that I'm standing behind you, watching as you explain yourself infornt of her.
    Dude, good job, respect

  • 19 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    OH MY GOD!!!!! Allen!!! My fairy godfather!!! I CANT BELIEVE I HAVNT COMMENTED ON THIS POEM!!! omg i feel so ashamed, so sorry for the late reply but thepoem was beautiful lyk all ur other work. roch is ver lucky, u seem very genuine. aleen u havnt been on for a long time now, missin you and your work! hope everythings aiight! luv ya xxoo, liss

  • 19 years ago

    by Ş∂ņďħy∂

    Very nice poem. while reading you can feel the words are so true. Well expressed. And good luck.
    Love, Trincy.

  • 20 years ago

    by julie

    Hey that was beautiful, and there is no way it eserves anything less than a 5. I cant imagine how it must feel to have such excellent poetry written about you, exellent poem!
    Take care,
    Julie
    -xx-

  • 20 years ago

    by Allen

    Er... Dear Ian... if you ever stumble upon this page again.. can you please tell me what your comments mean?? :) I feel a bit lost after reading it :)... its nice to read tho...

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