HA the Matrix (any of them) put you too sleep dude it did the complete opposite for me, I was sleepless for weeks wondering when the computer world was going to start taking us over LoL Jokes - great piece again very unique and a very original concept I haven't read anything quite like this poem, I think your choice of words give reader the ability to interpret a million different things - thats what I call talent!
Luv Eirisa

Thank you again, movies i have seen a lot have put me to sleep, i try to give it more then one meaning...more of a sonata feeling, it is nice to know that someone is picking up on that. I am so glad that you like my poems. i am glad that you like them, it gives me something to write about now. Now that my poems won't go unoticed.