by Shy
WOW 5/5 |
by ASPHYXIATED
wow!!!!!!!!!!! so blooming good i dont no how u do it? |
by Robert
very well done from what I have see you have alot of potential keep up the writing if you ever need some pointer give me a hollar... |
good. i like how you used what the people were saying. but yeah...great job once again |
by natalie
I really liked it, its sad though :( |
by Kia
chilling.... is this true that's an awesome poem written with a lot of emotion great job |
by Kayla
wow great poem...kinda freaky...but soo true...5/5 excellent!!! luv yas mwah\ |
by M MEM
Omg, powerful, strong, so very good, nice job |