by insane authority Nov 4, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Drown me under the deepest sea |
dude,your a good writer,your work looks better than mine.keep writing,i gave you a 5. |
by Shædow Poet
One word... POWERFUL! not many poems can just give off an air of power and beauty. Loved it, seemed like it could make a good song! |
lol ya |
by !*!Zoe!*!
OK...I liked the poem alot and unfortunately there was one thing that REALLY pissed me off. The wasy you spelled "steel". It should be "steal". I won't vote on this now but tell me when you change the "steel" to "steal" and I'll give you the 5 you deserve. |