Very Good poem dear...The emotions flew very nicely...something like that happend to my friend...I hope it wasent true for you...if so..Im sorry for your lost...
anyways...good poem:) great job..keep em' comming:)
-SaRs-

OMG this poem is seriously awesome... i LOVE it... i think it's one of the best i've read... i really do like it a lot and im giving it a 5... keep on writing cuz ur sooooooo good!!
much love,
-Molly

So tragic. My eyes are stinging.
Again, beautiful work in your tragedies, the way you take a story and are able to add such emotion into it that the reader feels the horror as well is fantastic. So many beautiful lines that you used to display the emotions and add such a deepening effect to the piece. Tragically lovely, great job, beautiful