Giving up

by Just me   Nov 5, 2004


When I heard those words
My heart tore in half
Haven't talked to you since that day
You haven't called me
Not even to say "hay"
I thought I meant more to you
What the hell did I do?
To deserve something like this
At night it is you that i miss
its hard to sleep
with out that goodnight
or sometimes a random sleep tight
I loved you more than anything
more than life itself
I know i made some mistakes
Does it always have to end in heart breaks?
You said you would never break my heart
you said we would never be apart
I believed every word
You said you loved me
I believed that bullshit too
I love you and always will
My love for you was real
I guess you didn't care for me
I always thought we were meant to be
Well now I'm letting go
I'm all alone
I'm not holding on to something thats not there

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  • 19 years ago

    by Aldiyana

    hey gurll...juss wanted to say thanks for commenting on ma poem...im glad to hear that it touched you...since my whole goal is writing poems that people can realate to and that can touch them...if yah want i got more to check out i got heaps on breakupz...since im in dat stage right now...so feel free to come and look aye...and anyone else out there come check em out...and try and comment on it since i love reading wat chu guys think...good or bad...well dass all aye love always aldiyana

  • 20 years ago

    by tamra chantel

    this is a really cool poem i like it a lot this is a definet feeling that i have for a man that was once in my life well thanx for writeing about mine ttul
    tamra

  • 20 years ago

    by Molly Elizabeth

    i REALLY like this one a lot... i can so relate!! keep it up
    -Mols

  • 20 years ago

    by Just me

    I lovED Nathan more than everything...he was my world and my soul..but i guess there was something standing in his way of truly loving me