Hey Kid!
That is a really good poem. I'm not really good at commenting but I am going to try!
Try to keep your chin up, it is easier to see Heaven that way and no one wants to lose you.
Remember this quote; Take Life One Day At A Time. Live, Laugh And Learn.. Be You, Be True.. Breathe.

Wow....Really good, your a good writer and I really look foward to read more of your work. Keep your head up and battle feelings that make you wanna hurt yourself. I used to be a cutter and it was very hard to stop, you may not know me but I'm here for you if you want a shoulder to cry on or want to talk to someone who knows what it feels like to have been through things similar to your experiences.

*~*Fre@k*~*

I love the part when you wrote "as she looked in the mirror
she watched the crimson flow
mixing with every icy tear",
Well my comment would be to you is NEVER give people the satisfaction of watching you struggle, you have talent that is quite obvious, life works in mysterious ways and sometimes it really suck a** but keep holding your head up and struggle with that smile because when it is all over it is you who wins in the end....
love scoobs

have a lil faith. i know its hard to hear tht and hard to do........i have been where u r...... do ur bes an keep ur head up! it was an awsome poem....... if ya need to talk treestar890@aol.com

it made me cry.....thatz all i can say...
it was god man reall god......keep writing
dont give up
cheerio

yea that was me i remeber i had to drink alot of charcol (spell check) and they had to punk my stomach yikes i dont even want to remeber it. but yea i survied.

yea that was me i remeber i had to drink alot of charcol (spell check) and they had to punk my stomach yikes i dont even want to remeber it. but yea i survied.

That is soo good...but im sorry its true...if i ever find the people that did that 2 you no matter if were strangers i would make them all pay i PROMISE ~*Terry~* ReAD MY POEMS SOMETIME

wow this is realy deep how sad its really good though .

read please. you are not alone...

by ReBecca

To all the young children
on this site.
My heart hurts for you,
and I sympathize with your plight.

You are all so young,
to have to go through this pain.
You should have been nurtured and loved.
Not have to live with abuse and disdain.

I read your poetry,
and I cant help my tears.
To be so young and lost,
in your tender years.

Please keep fighting,
and try to live another day.
Soon you'll be older
and your hurt and fears will be at bay.

I have a 7 year old child
and I love him best.
If I could, I'd take you all,
and hold you to my chest.

I'd tell you that it'll all be okay.
I'd console you and wipe away your tears.
I cry for you all,
my little dears.

ReBecca Sanchez

holly molelly that was good, quite sad i must say

Hi i no u dont know hoo i am and even wat im like but i hurt myself too, i dont do it on a large scale coz i have to hide it but i still no how hard it is to deal with stuff like that. It is a beautiful poem and very well ritten. if u ever wanna talk im happy to coz i always think im alone in cutting meself even tho i no theres others. if you are ever not busy on here plz have a look at some of my stuff coz id like to hear ur views. deadnalone

Hi i no u dont know hoo i am and even wat im like but i hurt myself too, i dont do it on a large scale coz i have to hide it but i still no how hard it is to deal with stuff like that. It is a beautiful poem and very well ritten. if u ever wanna talk im happy to coz i always think im alone in cutting meself even tho i no theres others. if you are ever not busy on here plz have a look at some of my stuff coz id like to hear ur views. deadnalone

this is realli good, sry for your pain my life hasnt been good either but it hasnt been that bad. hopefully you pull through

wow...this is a really good poem....its so sad too:( very good....ur an excellent writer keep it up! and i hope ur doing ok now....i went through the same crap.....but i just never got caught and put in the hospital...if u would like to u could read some of my poems...and comment i would appreciate it....but ur on my favorites by the way....:P keep writin <3ayna<3

My comment probly doesn't matter much cuz you have all these other comments to read but i just wanted to let you know that im really sorry and i hope that you make it. its just soo sad........it was a wonderful poem but you didn't deserve that! oh my god their are some sick freaks in this world and im sorry you had to have that happen to you! ya i don't know you but i really hope things get better for you!

omg.. i am so sorry, this poem is really good.. its so sad that its true, i dont see how you could go through all of that. ive been raped before as well, but not by any one i knew or loved, and oh wow I just can't get over that.. i love you! stay strong!
love stacy

That was something that should never happen. I am 16 and my father is abusive. I live through the horrer every day. Thank you for writing this.

Your story touches my heart as it touches many others I'm sure. Keep your head high and remember you were put on earth for a reason. After much thought I finally realized it too..

Your story touches my heart as it touches many others I'm sure. Keep your head high and remember you were put on earth for a reason. After much thought I finally realized it too..