I cant seem to find myself

by polly   Nov 5, 2004


I cannot find my soul

I think it maybe trapped

In a buzzing vortex of nightmares and grey

May be sat there

In the darkness of my bed I saw a girl

Redness ran down her face

Inside I think she was screaming

But breathing, was all that could be seen

These nightmares and visions

Will not seize to disperse

Caged in confusion and heart ache

Maybe laid there

My ears while I sleep hear shrieks of thunder

My body while I sleep drowns in panic

My voice while I sleep is choked with ice

And my eyes fidget like my body in its blindness

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  • 19 years ago

    by ¤©h€€®ƒüll¥♥©¥ñ!c@l¤

    Wow.... that was very emotional. Nicely written. This part was probably the best:

    "These nightmares and visions

    Will not seize to disperse

    Caged in confusion and heart ache

    Maybe laid there"

    Very descriptive! Beautiful job. To improve, you could try to make the rhythem more consistent; make each line about the same number of syllables. Other than that, great job! I can't beleive not one person has voted on this! definatly a 5/5. Keep it up!

    -Cheerfully Cynical

  • 19 years ago

    by yaRis

    hey nice poem, strong emotions nice! Thanx for reading my poem, don't worry if i get my wings ill ask god to give you some too ok! Keep up the good work okay... ciao..

  • 20 years ago

    by Emzie

    well done. <3 emz x

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