1am blues

by PAUL HEWSON   Nov 5, 2004


1am blues,
24 hour news.
win or lose ,
u choose.
2am tears,
24hour fears.
stay or leave,
dare to believe.
3 am shivers ,
shouts become whispers.
toss and turn ,
extinguish ... BURN.
4am insomnia,
whats wrong with ya ?
tossing and turning,
stomach churning.
5am blues ,
24 hour news ,
points of view .
its all up to you !!!

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This was abit like me last night tossing and turning not being able to sleep because of the cold mixed with a blackened mind and insomnia. Insomnia is such a pain at times but it Can get you thinking about things alot. I often wonder where life is heading in the dead of night, usually nowhere.

    Great, catchy write.

    Em

  • 17 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Wow this is a great piece, really nice to read. keep it up
    Greta

  • 20 years ago

    by miss scooby

    Well 1 word to decribe it WOW...i have never read a poem that flowed this well...i loved it awsome job

    scooby

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