by Chloe Nov 5, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You lie so broken in your world, |
WOW! you are suck a good poet. this poem is awsome. can u read some of my stuff and comment.....5 |
by jamie25
keep up the good work! excellent! |
by Zayda
Your actually one of my favorites, i guess i did add u da very first time i read your poems, you're very talented, you have always been but this poem, this one poem might be the best, for it has da greatest amount of feeling, since it came staright from the heart... it is indeed sad, i guess i wish i cud get things better for u but u no i cant, Chloe, plz keep ur chin up, u'll get over this... |
by ReBecca
very sad. i hope things get better for you, and you find some way to ease your pain that isnt destructive to yourself. |
this is very well written and a great poem. keep it up! |