by Mild insomnia Nov 5, 2004
category :
Internet slang /
other
The flag lies tattered on the floor, |
kick @$$ poem..really strong..keep it up! great work^_^ |
by Ian Robert
good work, a little repetitive, neverless, good work |
by vanessarrr
that was a breath-taking amazing poem! it was sooo sad and strong. wow. i liked how you ended that with the repeating stanza. keep writing. take care:) |