Oh sweety this so sad - but you can do better than having a best friend who just walks out on you for a guy - you really do deserve better than that k?
So you stay smiling and stay strong and dont let it get you down. Thanks for sharing your poem
Luv Eirisa

That is indeed sad. Although the rhythm is a little too bouncy to be a serious poem. Anyway, i wish you the best of luck with your endeavors.

i agree w/ eirisa, she is one of my favorite poets on here. She gives good adives. Anyways to the poem aside the message that your bringing the saddness that you feel. Friends they come and they go, you'll always find that through out your life. Don't get depressed over it. Take the bad with the good and strive for better.

Now you need to fix some spelling errors of course lol.....And its kinda of staggering. One line i know you have to fix:
i feel as if how friendship
TO
i feel as if our friendship

But it was an ok poem again just on the spelling errors and the brokeness to it i would give you a 3. I also don't want to lower your score so i won't vote on this one.

Great poem:)

gr8 poem, your good!
thanks for ready mi other poem, so there u go thats wat hapn between me and Lindsay. xX

reading** sorrY xX