A older love

by ♥x__Pwincess danii//   Nov 6, 2004


Our love is not normal
because of age
but to be with you
i am ready at this stage

my heart flutters
every time you walk by
and if you keep walking
I'll start to cry

you may be a little older than me
so what i don't care
i want a love and romance
for us to share

i want to be with someone
and that someone is you
please feel the same
without you i don't know what to do

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  • 19 years ago

    by ♥x__Pwincess danii//

    thanks aimee

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacki

    ok good poem. They are getting better. Of course i started from my gay friend and worked my way up. THis one i would give you a 4 :)

  • 20 years ago

    by Brandy Sansotta

    I gave it a 2 because of the spelling but overall it was a good poem

  • 20 years ago

    by МÅťťђĕш Яĕĩŋĕßĕřg

    Good poem there. It seems we all have this kind of problem. We want someone to love us, but are afraid they'll walk right on by us. I hope it works out for you.

  • 20 years ago

    by Sweet As Sugar

    i loooove this poem!!
    i kinda ..used to have the same story !!
    anywayz...its really nice!! keep it up gurl!
    if u wanna read my poems go ahead!
    tell me wat u think ! ;)

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