kool, I will wait till it is done, do let me know alright?
WAITING!!!!!!!!

really liked it, reminded me of fins goin on around me. especially liked the lines:

'I'm tired of being scared for you,
i'm tired of worring about the things you do.'

rocks!:)
lucy -x-x-x-

:) this was in some way funny to read :D remember girl, you can't force someone to change :/ But anyway, good poem :) keep it up and take care :)

It is true you can not help someone change, you can only help them grow. But none the less you will always know you tried. Anyways i liked the poem, it had an angry, sad, kinda feel to it....great job!
take care
***with smiles**
Scooby