Comments : My 1st time

  • 20 years ago

    by ♥x__Pwincess danii//

    NOT THAT BAD CAN U TRY AND MALE THEM RHYME IT WOOD BE EVEN BETTER IF U DU LIKE THE RYMINF MAKE IT LONGER BUT OTHER THATN THANT I LIKE IT:D gud luck in da futre

  • 20 years ago

    by aZheR

    this may not sound interesting but i just want to share this...
    Yeah, its hard to stop yourself from cryin' when it really hurts you much..especially when the reason why you cried dont even care..its hard to pretend that you're strong without the person you love, and its hard to leave and go when you think that you'll die if ever that someone will be gone forever..i know that you'll miss the beatiful smile of that person, the wholesomeness, and the way that person makes you feel different...that's all...thank you for reading..