by vanessarrr
very nice poem. yes, interracial love is as beautiful as the normal one. some spelling mistakes here and there but the message is great. keep it up. take care:) |
i like ur poem!! |
by BaybeBlew
You spelt 'knows' wrong. |
by kirsty
i enjoyed reading this poem as it tells a story in a way and it's true about interracial love. people dont see the underneath just the skin. it'a not fair. |
The poem itelf was fair, but the message was great. You had some spelling mistakes in there. Overall I thought it was pretty good. WHy would they shun interracial love? I am so ethnically mixed i don't look like anything really. |
thanxxx for ur e-mail :D |
There were way too many spelling mistakes for me to give this anything but a one. WHERE=WE'RE, TO=TWO, NOES=KNOWS, IT=IT'S |
Good concept, but I agree with everyone else on the spelling. Keep writing.. I look forward to reading more |
by jennifer
Amazing poem! |
morgan i love you so much |