That is so sad....So beautiful though...amazing job Shadowed...Very deep...well done..It's touching...xxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Yes, sad but beautiful, its very nice of you to write a poem for your mother's brother, I can feel the fustraction and sadness as I read your words, very well written :) Keep up the good work, and take care :)

Wow, you are SO good! This has gotta be one of my fav's.

OMG!! how terrible..im so sorry for that loss...but this was just an amazing poem and so weel written you deserve way higher then a five! Much Love,
~Chelsey~

though i never had any siblings i still feel for your loss... i had a couple of friends die and i still miss them very much...

im so sry. this was beutifully written tho. this was very touching. keep writing becuase ur getting a 5.

that poem gave me he chills not many poems can do that, good job you have a talent

that was soo good, it gave me tingley feeling all over its so sad but really well written good job!!
-spunk-

that was good and ver sad but i loved it

How Sweet. Such a nice tribute!

**Rather, a talented Tribute!**