it is the most touching poem i have ever read. it made me cry for you, and her. i was once taught that the world was abeautiful place were gd people where protected by angels, but there are so many evil pple in this world, it is hard to believe. polly xxx

yea i know that movie was based off of her death.

i loved you story that happened to my boyfriends little sister these boys she know kidnapped her raped her and killed her. the funeral was less than a week ago so this poem is related to something that happened in my life i am so sorry if you can tell her family that i am sorry for what happened and i feel the same way

omg... nuffin i can say wil make it betta but i am sorry and touched and sik in my heart 4 wt da evil men did 2 er... sry ~jenni~

that was so sad.I am so sorry.

omg! i can't belive that people are capable of such thing- they will go to hell!! At least Kayla is protected in heaven now- r.i.p! Great poem Monica, a really touching and emotional poem! keep writting love Kayleigh xx

Man, this story made me want to cry. It's real good. It's emssed up how they did that to her, though.

omg i'm in tears that is really honestly amazing ! :') i'm sorry for what happened and R.I.P to that little gurl !

you have a very strong message in this poem. ANd its very sad. You have alot of spelling errors and the begining kinda bounces around. Other than that it was a good ok poem.

OMG! this was soooo sad. I'm sorry for that littl girls family. Great poem. Kinda reminds me of the beginnig of A Time to kill. very sad. keep up the good work tho.

touching, very touching, did u know this girl?

That is so sad:(:(:(:(

you may not think that its that good but for some people it opens their eyes to see that people are really sometimes so cruel! THANK YOU!

yea that was based off what happend smart one.

You have a really good talent for poetry, every one of your poems i have read have either made me cry or get tears to well in my eye's!!!

dont give up, and keep it going

Monica XOXO

wow that was a deep poem but very good im srry for that lil girl

Omg i am speechless. I am so sorry. Man this made me cry how can someone be so cruel to a little girl and just watch her suffer. My thoughts and prayers are with you and the family.
xoxoxox
Jess

I dont understand how someone so heartless could do that.. especially to a child. This is soo sad, i hope those men pay .. did they ever catch who did that harsh crime?

This poem is very touching, it brought tears to my eyes. what i want to know did those men get caught?

5/5 omg thiz poem waz so sad, i almost cried...thiz iz the the saddest thing i ever heard 2day....why would sumone hurt sumone like that....i dont understand....and u did really good on thiz poem... and it iz good so dont let nobodi tell u any different...keep writing cuz u are really good

much luv
peachez