wow! this poem is really deep! just out of curiosity...who is this poem about? i was thinking father or boyfriend...but maybe i'm wrong.
great work, hugs,blarg
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thats an awesome poem ..thx for ur comment too ..i can really relate ..cuz even tho hes givin u something u want ..u kno that it doesnt mean ne thing to him when hes drunk ...great idea -ashley

another great poem. keep up the great work. i love how you have so much emotion

great poem...but who is this poem about ??? really confused...