good job

wow, that poem was awesome. i could really identify with it. great writing. keep it up.

hey i was really touched by this poem. i am going through this with my best friend. ever since she moved in with her mom i dont get to see her a alot and for the past few weeks it seems like our friendship is falling apart and she doesnt call me as much as she did but i dunno, but i liked your poem it was good bye

Jewelz

THat is really incredible, i went through the exact same thing for over a year....can i tell you the truth? If it is awkward, or she is treating you badly, then get out. Be strong, because i let someone walk all over me for over a year before i stood up for myself thanx to the help of my real, true friends. It still isnt over, she wants to be friends again now but im trying to stand my ground cos i never want to go through that pain again! Find out who your realy friends are, and NEVER let them question your worth

AWWWW i like it ALOT gurl! i was wondering if i could put it in my dedicaiton to poetry project u have to choose 20 poems u relate to that someone else writes then write 10 yourself ill give you 100% credit and tell the source of where i found ur poem at so more people will read ur poems but only if u say i cna! (btw it was like ur a mind reader!)

Great poem ... I really hope everything works out for you, I know what it's like to lose a friend. Best of luck. Keep writing ...

Awesome....just Awesome.

*L&C*

love it girl I am going through it now with my friend but like she told me have faith she will be back she just neede some time to her self so I have faith in her and our love for each other so hang in there

ok no omg wow...i just read a poem a week or two ago that i thought i could relate to but that poem is nothing compared to this oh my freakin gosh i am in tears right now. you have said it. you have totally shown how i feel in that poem you wrote. it's wonderful, it's excellent. there isn't even one little part in it that i cannot relate to...everything is EXACTLY how i feel. i miss my best friend. god, i miss her.

wow that poem is amazing! you have a special talent, i really like it. It explains all the key points on how you feel about your friend. It's happened to me too, and it hurts, doesn't it. i fell out with my friend and the words you have used in your poem just say it all. It's so emotional and brought tears to my eyes reading it. It makes me think of past times with my friend and i ask myself how did it all go wrong? i would get down on me knees and beg her not to walk away too, but sometimes people change like that. i miss so many things about our relationship as well, and i'm sure a lot more other people know what you're going through. Like somebody said in another comment, you are not alone, just look around and you have thousands of other people by your side. I really hope things will work out for you and your friend, stay in there and you should get to where you want. It's all a matter of trying. Take care and good look once again! hopefully i should be able to patch things up with my friend to, infact i might email her this poem - it's so amazing!
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Omg, i seriously love this poem! and i can relate to it too! =]

I agree with Paige. I went thru this too and lemme tell u, the tears arent worth it if the friendship isnt. I tried and tried and tried to get her bak, but sumtimes u just have to let go. i found my true friend that i never really payed much mind to cuz i was busy with my best friend. dont let it happen to u, ur better than tht and u can make friends that will b ther 4eva. i dont give out my email to ppl but if u wanna talk them u can email me at desindian18@yahoo.com aiiite take care and try not to worry much. ill wait for ur email. byee

Wow, just wonderul poem! I can relate....Your flow and rhyming were very well done! You've got talent! Keep up the awesome work!
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~Angie~
xoxo

Dang! Great job. I hope everything worked out. I know it sucks. And a lot of people have gone through a lot of the same things, or so I have read. Well just wanted to say great job! Keep it up!

Hun i know exacly how u feel...
great poem ,u r a good writter!
i hope u n ur bff will always be friends...;)

Firstly...you are in my faves now. secondly big cuddles cos you deserve them hunni and thirdly...this poems the first poem thats made me cry like this....its so so good. its exactly how i feel just now and you have written it so well. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx take kare hunnix x x

*~* wow that was really good!! =] but it seems like you've fallen in love with your best friend??is that right? i dnt mean to offend or anything its just ive been there. It was the most horrible experience of my life, but the only way to get thorough it, is to let them go, and thats the hardest thing in the world! If tthis is the case, good-luck! x

This is problely the best poem i have ever read. i love it

erica mayb

Wow. this was amazinggg. i seriously almost started crying. im going through this and have been for the past like 2 yearss. it's probably the hardest thing i have ever had to experience. my best friend and i have been est friends for over 11 years now. and then we hit high school and everything has changed. we barely talk anymore and someone else is slowly taking her place in my life and it mostly happened because of her boyfriend, well ex, but same thingg. its a horriblee thing to go through, thats for suree! i hope it all is good for you now thoughh, seeing as this was written soooooo long agooo.