Isolation

by Nobrainy_duh   Nov 8, 2004


Isolation,
All alone,
Falling away,
From all I know,

Dying here,
Staying away,
No one around,
To save me today,

Slowly drowning,
Breathing stops,
Emotions flooding,
Over the top,

Someone save me,
Can anyone hear,
I'm crying out,
Is someone near?
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Just FYI, this poem really is not true, I wrote it when I felt like I was drifting away from some of my friends, but overall, it is somewhat true, but very exaggerated.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Caleb

    I like this poem a lot. I like how it's nice and short, yet it seems to have a lot of meaning.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    i love the poem, it describes how i feel sometimes beautiful job well written

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    i find your poem to be absouletly wonderful hun...i do feel this way a lot and even tho u said it wasnt true i captured in that poem...the emotion of it...if it wasnt true u do a great job to put urself in others shoes...God bless you...i read ur profile and hey i think u sound like a GREAT person...

    got aim...im me sometime heathercraig8 or iendurpain whicheva one...i am always on one of em...

    love always heather

  • 20 years ago

    by Lipton

    Hey! I noticed your self-pic. Bubbles... b-u-b ubbles! lol, anyway...
    Take care!

    ~ciao Lipton

  • 20 years ago

    by Lipton

    Hey! I'm here for ya! Both me and Daniel. Just don't run away at lunch!

    ~Ciao Lipton

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