This is so very deep. You are a very talented poet. I enjoy reading your poems a lot. Take great care

omg, this poem took my breath away, it really did! every line flowed onto the next perfectly, i wouldnt change a single word. The first stanza was really really good, but i cant choose a favourite bcos they were all so amazing! well done, this is deff one of my fave pieces by you for sure :)beanxx

Wow, that was really cool. Very deep, and such. You are a very talented writer!

~Ciao Lipton

Oh my...I could really feel the hopelessness grow with each stanza. Very well done...You have a wonderful way with words~Holly