Oh, Mommy (PRETTY LONG)

by !*!Zoe!*!   Nov 8, 2004


Lying on my deathbed,
Staring at the sky,
I’m only seven years old,
So then why must I die?

I want to be a ballerina,
But I can’t feel my feet.
The last thing I remember,
Is walking out onto the street.

I’m on the starched white sheets,
With IV tubes in my arm,
I’m so sorry Mommy,
I didn’t mean to cause you harm.

I was so careless this morning,
I didn’t follow your rule,
I didn't watch the flame,
And so now I am the fool.

I don’t understand what’s happening,
I don’t like seeing you cry,
Don’t worry, I’ll do my homework,
And then together we’ll bake a pie.

But if that doesn’t work out,
Because it just might just not,
I love you very much,
I’m just upset that I got caught.

Please don’t punish me, Mommy,
Please don’t put me on time out,
Please don’t say I’m a bad girl,
I promise that I won’t pout.

Just tell Daddy I miss him,
When he’s always on a trip,
Please tell my best friend Sally,
That she can have Barbie and Skip.

Thank you for being there for me,
Even if you think you weren’t,
Thank you for making me pancakes,
Even though they got burnt.

Tell this boy named Jared,
That I think that I’m in love,
I wish that I could kiss him,
Instead of giving him a shove.

Well, Mommy I’m becoming tired,
So I think I’ll get some sleep.
Please be here when I wake up,
Please make that a promise you keep.

Mommy bend your head down,
I’m too weak to pull myself up,
I want to give you a nighttime kiss,
I want to play Mom and Pup.

You’re right, it’s much too late,
And that’s a daytime game.
Mommy, will I be different?
Will things ever be the same?

I think I’m very sick
My head is feeling like lead,
Oh Mommy, I really love you,
And I’m sorry that I’m dead.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    brought tears in my eyes....wow

  • 20 years ago

    by jennifer

    This was another amazing poem, really touched me deep down to my core. Your amazing!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Well, I think I am going to add you to my favorites now, this was just incredible...>SAD though. I want to read the rest of your poems....

  • 20 years ago

    by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X

    here btw i am really offended i wrote this poem myself and i would never critise someones work like that. if you have nothing positive to say bout my poems then please dont waste my time. this poem is quite good btw! :D

  • 20 years ago

    by Missunderstood_Angel

    i liked the poem but sorry i dont wanna be a $itch but yea why would u write a poem like that later