wow gurl that was wicked good! keep em commin!

i think that the stanzas and lines were really short but i liked it that way...i kinda gave way to the simple pain experienced in this poem...i thought it was very creative and very original...keep it up and i hope to read more of your work soon....

that was an amazing poem, your words are really beautiful, descriptive and creative, just the way i like it! awesome job, and keep it up :) x x x x

Amazing poem great job I love it! very dark and powerful it really caught my attention keep it up!

Love, Taylor

Dark and strong. That last stanza was especially perfect in my opinion. Very good job.

Lance

this is amazingly good!! keep it up!!

alwayz,
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Andrea, this is a very captivating piece. I loved the descriptions, I could feel the heat! Great job~Holly

excellent poem,i loved it very dark and kinda mad keep em coming love your work jaime lee xxx

Awsome poem...love it!!!

now this is a very profound well written dark poem

Another wonderful poem. keep up the good work... 5....

That was wicked there! Keep it comming!

meow pussycat nice one lol loved it!

Hey, your poems are pretty darn good ^_^ and no, i can't really relate to most of them, hehe.