i like this one actually!! keep it up
-Mols

its is actually very good. if u ever got time av a look at mine then ull realise how class that is.

Great poem sweetie! It's always nice to have a "release" every now and again. You are such a wonderful writer and very good poet. I hope you continue writing for a long time because you are very talented. Thank you so much for commenting on my poem. It means a lot to me. Keep up the good work and best of luck to you in whatever you do.

wow, thats really good...i really did like it and i thought that it was really heartfelt and meaningful..i know i can relate to it...and its really good that you got your release throught this poem.....keep up the good work and just keep your head up...