X.x Your under my spell x.x

by -x-Ruthie-x-   Nov 8, 2004


I'm the pressure on your skin,
Holding you tightly, Drawing you closer within.

Sending shivers down your spine,
Your under my spell, Now your truly mine.

Ive got you wrapped around my finger,
Get use to the cold, I will always linger.

I will always haunt you in your sleep,
watch you back,'Cos You are mine to keep

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    The reason why I checked this poem out was because it was in the dark section and I'm glad I did. It's short but that doesn't take away from how well written it is. You might want to take a look at grammar, though. It flows well, doesn't seem forced, and if reading at night might add a bit of a chill factor to it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah-Louise

    Short but sweet. This one's real effective, and it flows really well. well done x

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    Excellent poem! Awesome lyrics, 5! Check out mine if you find the time.

  • 20 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    creepy.. but awesome! i liked the concept and the title. very very unique and well written. yes, it's short but i really enjoyed reading it. keep writing. take care:)

  • 20 years ago

    by -x-Ruthie-x-

    Thanks.. xx