by -x-Ruthie-x- Nov 8, 2004
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
I'm the pressure on your skin, |
by Kaylee
The reason why I checked this poem out was because it was in the dark section and I'm glad I did. It's short but that doesn't take away from how well written it is. You might want to take a look at grammar, though. It flows well, doesn't seem forced, and if reading at night might add a bit of a chill factor to it. |
by Sarah-Louise
Short but sweet. This one's real effective, and it flows really well. well done x |
by Forever29
Excellent poem! Awesome lyrics, 5! Check out mine if you find the time. |
by vanessarrr
creepy.. but awesome! i liked the concept and the title. very very unique and well written. yes, it's short but i really enjoyed reading it. keep writing. take care:) |
by -x-Ruthie-x-
Thanks.. xx |