hey good poem, it really fits together well
good job xxx

Thanks.. xx

creepy.. but awesome! i liked the concept and the title. very very unique and well written. yes, it's short but i really enjoyed reading it. keep writing. take care:)

Excellent poem! Awesome lyrics, 5! Check out mine if you find the time.

Short but sweet. This one's real effective, and it flows really well. well done x

The reason why I checked this poem out was because it was in the dark section and I'm glad I did. It's short but that doesn't take away from how well written it is. You might want to take a look at grammar, though. It flows well, doesn't seem forced, and if reading at night might add a bit of a chill factor to it.