Your young just like me, 13 years old..we still have our whole life ahead of us..you just gotta believe that there is a guy out there that will love you forever..I believe it^_^ Good poem..keep it up gurl! -Shannon- |
thanxx a lot.........not many people encourage me like you do |
by Alaleighea
You commented on several of my poems so i thought it just to comment on some of yours, we really do seem to have a lot in common, this poem is great i love th fluidly it flows, the words just seem to move together nicely, and ive been there, still am there i give it a solid 5! |
by FireCracker
LOVED IT .. ! AMAZING JOB .. ! UR WORDS REACH OUT SO MUCH AND TOUCH OTHER PPL .. ! This is a gr8 poem, lol, ur worded and rythm is like perfect . . ! Keep it up and check out more poems but me cuz ur other kind words were truly appreaciated! THANKS AGAIN .. ! BEST OF LUCK WIT UR POTRY .. ! AND TAKE CARE |
aw this poem was wonderfully written, you expressed yourself really well, and i love the way its flows, good job!! thanks so much for your comment... |