GREAT JOB molly!!!! this poems describes me and my ex perfectly. and how she hurt me and said everything will get better and it will take some time but we would be able to work things out but i knew it was all a lie cuz she's moved on. thats why i love this line -Don't say It will get better
Don't say it will take time.
Don't say It was a mistake.
Don't tell me that wasn't a lie. Great poem sweetie and keep it up
love yas much molly
bobby

aww thanks!! I'm glad you can relate... and I'm sorry about your relationship... idk ppl can be so hurtful sometimes!! I'm glad you liked it!!
love yas!!
-Molly

i can really relate to this poem, also. i took it deep to heart and it reminded me so much of me and my ex's break up. thnx and keep writing.

thanks for the comment, and im glad you could relate!! I'll always be writing!!
much love,
-Molly