I am disgusted that you even said your work wasn't that good - this is the first piece of yours i have read and you my darling are bloody brilliant!
This piece was so original and descrptive and a great read that kept me hanging on till the end - fabulous use of words - and thankyou for your comment on my poem written for Leanne Gornall! Im off to read more of your stuff girl!
Your friend Eirisa

this is a sad and powerful poem and very very truthful, down with the monkey!
i like the realism of it!
keep scribblin'
catch ya