omg hun dat was fantastic. i n o ive said it before but when ever you want 2 talk, wot ever its about im here

5/5

lucy -x-x-x-x-x-

oh wow hunnie u really r getting better! btw that poem made me tear up lol :)

hey this is a really good poem i am sorry to hear that it is something you have gone through but hey everyone gets thier fair share of pain in life, just it's sad about how others seem to get more. i hope your ok,

best of wishes ~lil slam~

Hey, I know this was a while ago, but my step dad treats my mom like crap, so I can relate. Things change over time, I'm sorry that this happened, but at least she is safe. I hope you meet a good guy.

Great poem as always, good writing, nice imagery. Keep it up. 5/5

yeh he was a bit of a b*st*rd thanks though.

CHEERS! lol

-ellie

The poem was sad, but the poem itself was good. You had good rhymes and flow.
Plz, check out mine when u get the chance, thx.
Keep it up and stay strong*hugs*

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

I know u wrote this poem ages ago but it's truly amazing. I would tell u which bit is my favourite but I can't decide! Thanx again for being you :)

Emmi xx