by !*!Zoe!*! Nov 9, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
As I sit and stare out the window on the bus, |
by Elise
dont kno but there's soething that i dont like...i dont know what it is.... |
really good write. strong emotion, the sadness comes through. keep up the great work! |
by blarg
i really like the feeling and the general idea of this poem but it could use a little rewording. still great though!! |