great poem! i love it! a lot of feeling and rhythm and it shows a great storry! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

wow man that was great to keep the style all over the poem that was really great

Awesome poem, keep up the good work.

wow! loved it right from start to end
its totally awesome!

You are a great poet this poem is so powerful yet you are able to adapt in the words that are big and some people probably wouldn't understand. You are amazing and have a great vocabulary!!