Death Through Blue Eyes

by Aken Sol   Nov 10, 2004


Your neptunic eyes peer into me
As they undress my soul.
One must be blind not to see
The darkness in them that seem to glow.

As you slither towards my direction
I try but can’t budge.
Paralysis spreads like an infection
Your insane smile holds no grudge.

You take out something and slit your wrist
Just to show me what your blade could do
Blood dripped from it’s tip, my eyes wet as mist
When my cheek felt the cold steel and wet goo.

Laughing, you drew your knife away
I shudder, was the blood yours or mine?
As you licked it as if to say
“I think you’ll be quite nice to dine.”

I try to close my eyes
Yet even they seem to be stuck.
And my mind began asking all the whys
Starting with how I got into this muck

I felt the cold metal in my gut
As you drag it up and piece my back
I collapse and try to get up but,
Air and power is what I lack.

As my request for light was denied,
The room turned black and I couldn’t see
And as I took my last breath and died,
Your neptunic eyes peer into me.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    all the animal words you use make me feel like this poem is actually telling the story of an animal, but then again I'm not sure. The whole wrist thing sorta throws me off when it comes to my interpretation, but the slithering thing, along with some other stuff...well it reminds me of a snake and fish actually, but only because you gut fish and snakes slither. Neptunic is cool, definitely makes it all a bit fishy though, badah ching!

  • 20 years ago

    by Lance Hardy

    you're pretty crazy ken..err akensol, the last two lines in the 3rd stanza were odd, but "cute" i guess...lol. good one

  • 20 years ago

    by Nefarius

    pretty good and very scary, my stomach still bends, when i'm thinking about feeling a blade in my guts

    that was really good