pretty good and very scary, my stomach still bends, when i'm thinking about feeling a blade in my guts

that was really good

you're pretty crazy ken..err akensol, the last two lines in the 3rd stanza were odd, but "cute" i guess...lol. good one

all the animal words you use make me feel like this poem is actually telling the story of an animal, but then again I'm not sure. The whole wrist thing sorta throws me off when it comes to my interpretation, but the slithering thing, along with some other stuff...well it reminds me of a snake and fish actually, but only because you gut fish and snakes slither. Neptunic is cool, definitely makes it all a bit fishy though, badah ching!