Amazing poem hun...really loved the first verse...well done xxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCareAlwaysxx

Sitting by the waterside, wind blowing through my hair,
a crimson tear is blown away, by the cold November air.
My hopes have crashed and my world has burst,
darkness is waiting, for death; I thirst.

All I can say is "Wow"

this is a great poem. i am amazed. keep it up!

i have to agree with everyone ,...all i can say is WOW! you have an amazing talent! keep up the good work!

oh my god, that was amazing!!! i love it. i, my self enjoy reading and writing dpressing poems, and yours i must say is one of the best yet, i love it keep it up, check out mine!!!
-spunk-

Wow...Excellent Poem:D...
Keep it up... 5/5...
~!~Luv Sedusha~!~

wow... that was fantastic. sad but very well done
~cort~

another great poem! keep up the good work! i agree with everyone when they say how great it is! happy thanksgiving!