Fall Apart

This one really isn't very good but i had to develop the idea, it just didn't work too well. Anyways, tell me what you think. Does it seem unfinished?

My friends can't see me fall apart,
My crying eyes and my frozen heart,
I'm shaking and scared that I'm not gonna die,
When i take the pills to end this lie,

The pills i take to break my mask,
To break me free from my tears at last,
I'll slowly die and fade away,
I told all my friends i would be okay,

But, they will be okay when I'm not here,
They'll know I'll be free from all of my fear.

*All votes and comments greatly appreciated as always*