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by nicole Nov 10, 2004 category : Love, romance / first love
He knew her every move he watched her for so long, he was so obsessed with her he even wrote her a song. he followed her around the school he watched her on the beach, he was so obsessed with her he was like a leach. he finally got the courage to ask her to the dance, all he wanted from her was just a little romance. he asked her to the dance and she turned, laughed at him, he was so depressed he felt like one big sin. he went home crying, went into the kitchen and took a knife, went to his room and took his life. *plz comment id love to know what u all think* i really dnt think i like this one
by nicole
thanx for that i will do x
by Infinite*
I like the idea of this poem, perhaps you could add in some more descriptive words to help convey the emotions. i like the repetition used :)
by confusion
good work :) liked the sudden ending lu -x-x-x-