Secrets untold

by Odette   Nov 10, 2004


I've always loved you but could never tell, that you make me feel so swell. My knees start to feel like jelly, something feels weird inside my belly.

My face starts to turn dark red, because of these feelings unsaid. Won't you just love me back? I could just give you a smack.

I thought I would never love anyone, until I found you. It makes me want to cry, so hand me a tissue.

I can't really express this feeling, but I've always wanted to confess. That you my love, relieve my stress.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brandy Sansotta

    Very well written. Keep up the good job. Instead of putting everything on the same line or whatever try putting a sentence on one line like instead of
    I THOUGHT I WOULD NEVER LOVE ANYONE UNTIL I FOUND YOU. IT MAKES ME WANNA CRY SO HAND ME A TISSUE. Try: I thought I would never love anyone, until I found you.
    It makes me wanna cry, so hand me a tissue

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