Comments : Secrets untold

  • 19 years ago

    by Brandy Sansotta

    Very well written. Keep up the good job. Instead of putting everything on the same line or whatever try putting a sentence on one line like instead of
    I THOUGHT I WOULD NEVER LOVE ANYONE UNTIL I FOUND YOU. IT MAKES ME WANNA CRY SO HAND ME A TISSUE. Try: I thought I would never love anyone, until I found you.
    It makes me wanna cry, so hand me a tissue