Comments : Dreams

  • 20 years ago

    by confusion

    great poem. can really relate at the moment and i hate it. especially liked the lines :

    My body grows numb... my dreams reappear...
    They scream out your name and beckon you near.
    Then my eyes fall upon her... you're holding her tight...
    I guess you'll be dreaming about her tonight.
    really good
    lu -x-x-x-

  • 20 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Very good poem really enjoyed it!! keep writing the good poems.

  • 20 years ago

    by yolande the dreamer

    oh man do you read my mind or something??? this is exactly what im feeling.......

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    WoW one of ur best i think so far! hope u dont mind me commenting on ost o ur poems lol! loved how well the poem flowed
    take care
    xxxLoUxxx