Real love?

by Lil Luce   Nov 10, 2004


Your final words were spoken
as the curtains began to close,
'I do love you' was your token
those where the words that You chose.

As the act came to an end
the hurt was almost too much,
On my own I'd have to fend
when all I wanted was your touch.

The tender kiss on the end of my nose
and that knowing little smile,
Was the only thing I'd have chose
as the world past by mile by mile.

But now it makes me wonder
whether that token was true,
As it's now her who is your stunner
and shares those nights with you.

It wasn't in your heart to try
and now it's with another,
You opened me up to all your lies
will she be treated the same?I shudder.

I just long to walk away
and forget this love I feel,
I no longer cry for the things I can't say
One Question...Was your love real?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    You were right! i really can relate to this. I really think its an interesting poem, sort of makes me think of drama class, when the curtins (SP?) and you're standing there, all alone. its great. :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I think we all have that question sometime in our lives. Good feeling in this poem very well put! Loved it! Check out mine I think u have read some before I have a new one! Thanx and Take Care!

  • 20 years ago

    by Jesslynn

    I really liked this one because I really feel the same way...thank u for ur comment.

  • 20 years ago

    by Liam

    wow, its like the poem i tried to write earlier but uve managed to actually fnd the words to write it! great poem, can really relate to it to.