Hey, this poem is not bad at all! ITs awesome!!!! I really really liked it!!! I think everyone could take away a different meaning from this poem, thats what makes it soo cool!! I love poems like this!!!
good work!

I Definately Liked This... When I write the poem takes it's own shape, in my opinion if you try to guide it, it won't be as good. Keep writing.

What?! You think that poem isn't really good? I loved it, it was....very detailed...and different. I rate a 5 for excellence...:) KEEP WRITING. Parts of it were so detailed..it made you think...YAY congrats. -Tori*

regardless of what you said about not being good i thought it was great! I thought it was very original...i havn't seen a poem on the dark site that talks about painting. I'm going to give you a 5

Wow, I love it! It's very radiant, and full of expression. Nice work!

i really like it

wot a gr8 poem. ive only jut started writing poems since things started going rong for me i express my self in poems. I'd be gr8ful for any advice

good, different than the rest, but good nonetheless. i got some new stuff. and i'd really apreciate it if you took a look and commented. just ya know tell me your opinion.

Wow, what an amazing poem. If you dont think that poem is good then id like to read a 'good' poem by you. The emotions in it were so good. I could really relate to it.