by sarah jenkins Nov 10, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
There is a wonderful place where know one knows, |
by Ann Stareyes
Great job, Sarah. You have got talent, keep it up. lol |
by erely
Hi Sarah,I really liked the thought process that helped you create this one...good writing |
by Lauren
if only this was a real place...great poem, keep writing and thinking good thoughts! |
by Amanda
That was so wonderful |
This is absolutely beautiful, I also like how you use the commas to make it flow and rhyme, this is especially helpful when you dont |