The Wonderful Place

by sarah jenkins   Nov 10, 2004


There is a wonderful place where know one knows,
thats filled with beauty, that glows and glows.
The people can lie happily, under a moon lit sky
without taking deep breaths and letting out sighs.
They don't have to worry about, depression or fights
just laying there with people, on breezy nights.
No one makes fun of you,yells, or screams in your face,
or says that they hate you, because of your race.
You don't have to worry about whats right and whats wrong,
All troubles that bother you, have been away for so long.
Now nothing but love, is filled your heart,
what a beautiful beginning, and a fresh new start.
This place is not physically real,its just a mer thought,
thats lost within, and cannot be caught.
But it stays with you through night and through day,
it lives in your dreams, what you think, what you say.

* I would really like it, if some of you guys would vote, or add comments, to let me know what you think of me, or if you have any suggestions!*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Great job, Sarah. You have got talent, keep it up. lol

  • 19 years ago

    by erely

    Hi Sarah,I really liked the thought process that helped you create this one...good writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Lauren

    if only this was a real place...great poem, keep writing and thinking good thoughts!
    xoxo
    Lauren

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    That was so wonderful
    and thankyou for your comment on mine and if you could would you please read and comment my poem " Do it only for you"
    i know that its really long but its what i am going through and i would really like it if you told me what you think because i think its my best one i have ever done!!!!

    thankyou
    xoxox
    amanda

  • 19 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    This is absolutely beautiful, I also like how you use the commas to make it flow and rhyme, this is especially helpful when you dont

    space

    like that... I dont know what thats called I guess, lol. Anyway great job.
    With love, K Kristina