This is one of those poems that makes one wonder (in a good manner) about your meaning... the prima facie or something under the surface? Nice!

great job hun i loved it. it was a good poem and it had a great flow to it. i hope to read more of your poems and you are in my fav's you earned it cuz you write very well
take care sweetie oh i noticed your from ohio so am i cool. send me a message sometime. k?
take care
-bobby-

Gr8 poem i really wished that place existed:) Keep writing coz you clearly have a talent.
P.S thanks 4 your comment it really meant alot
xoxoxoxox

This one is much better then "theres a feeling i get" I really enjoyed reading this poem. Unlike most peoms I wasnt bored by the third line. Good job

thats good. wish i cud be dere wiv ma man.

wow this really is great, u have a great imagination and are very tallented, i hope to read more of your poems in the future!!

This poem creates for me a picture of paradise. It flows so well, it rolls with a smooth loving feel.

I love how u put ur poems together, it's awesome! i wish I could write like dat! keep writin I added u to my favs! u go gurl!!!!
ER

Awesome poem!!! Keep up the good work. Thanks for the E-Mail.
-Kate

This is absolutely beautiful, I also like how you use the commas to make it flow and rhyme, this is especially helpful when you dont

space

like that... I dont know what thats called I guess, lol. Anyway great job.
With love, K Kristina

That was so wonderful
and thankyou for your comment on mine and if you could would you please read and comment my poem " Do it only for you"
i know that its really long but its what i am going through and i would really like it if you told me what you think because i think its my best one i have ever done!!!!

thankyou
xoxox
amanda

if only this was a real place...great poem, keep writing and thinking good thoughts!
xoxo
Lauren

Hi Sarah,I really liked the thought process that helped you create this one...good writing

Great job, Sarah. You have got talent, keep it up. lol