Thank you very much.. o.O it's like I'm talking to myself haha, Our names rock!

This poem is really neat...I noticed that you rhyme a lot with the same words...may I suggest an online rhyming dictionary? It helped me a great deal.

I noticed I did that too =/ I just have a terrible memory so I forget what I rhyme about with my old poems. And thank you for the suggestion.

wow. that was just a great poem. thank you for your comments, i appriciated them. but like i said, this is a great poem. It comes together for a strong ending, my favorite part of it. peacee -Luke