I really like this one.. I can relate to it in some ways. Good job. :D

Great, thanks. What do you mean by "yeah guess so"...I don't understand.

AMEN! I loved this poem, absolutely loved it. So many of us can totally relate, and some of us NEVER will. This is so powerful. It really, really touched me. Fantastic Job!!

Katie

excellent poem, i can relate to it too.. keep up the great work. :D

excellent poem, i can relate to it too.. keep up the great work. :D

HELL YA!!
I can really relate
FANTASTIC poem

I really liked your poem it was very deep n keep up the work! very well out!
erin*

i liked it... gave it a 5... =) hope u pass by mine =)

Although you and I strongly disagree with some things you are an amazing writer. I am blown away by the few poems of yours I have read. I hope that you were not offended about the comments I made of you being 13, I just feel so strongly about certain things and there are things that younger people just don't understand unless they have actually been there and seen it. I was only 10 or 11 when my sister had her abortion, I was there, you misunderstood, not actually watching the baby coming out but I was there to see what it did to her life when she came out of that doctor's office. At 10 years old I KNEW it was WRONG to do what my sister did, I understood it was MURDER. (Whether or not I was the ONLY one that thought that way, I didn't care, I hated it) I know that anyone can understand if they experience it. And to be 13 you DO understand a thing or two about life, I can see that in your poetry .....Anyway I have been rambling, I apologize...Look forward to future debates with you.....Take Care

WOW! i loved this poem, i can realate to it on things that i have been through..thanks for the input on my poem that you commented on.

i feel this way sometimes...yea ilove this poem...wow

I love this poem, I can relate to some things, your a good writer too....

~Rain~